
Greetings everyone!
Todays theme is Transition do pop over to Jenn's blog (clicky the banner) and check out the other entries.

I
One to another
A triumphant change in state
Emerging beauty
II
Once small and naïve
Then was wild and all knowing
Now older, wiser
Have a wonderful Wednesday x
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I really enjoyed both of your Haiku; so clever finding two completely different angles!
ReplyDeleteLovely!!!! Thank you! Take care
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Thats a terrific pic.
ReplyDeleteboth haikus are marvelous, i could rhyme myself with the second one very much :)
Trisha
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Mine:
http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/01/20/free-soul-20th-jan-2011/
Wonderful transition from birth to youth and into seniority status, learning, transformation all the time.
ReplyDeleteGreat haiku. I especially liked the second one. Gave me a wry smile :O)
ReplyDeleteLove them Margo.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment on Clarissa's blog today about my post. Oh yes, and you are once again entered into the contest to win...I hope you do.
Nancy
N. R. Williams, fantasy author
Loved them Margo but I could never have done it!! Haikus are just not in my repetoire LOL! Good post:)
ReplyDeleteVery inspirational. :) Thanks for sharing your work.
ReplyDeleteLove the second one!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haikus and lovely photo.
ReplyDeleteThe epitome of transition, that last one - love it best!
ReplyDeleteLovely Margo, thank you.
ReplyDeleteI especially liked the second one
Thanks for entering my blogfest ... just a reminder that it starts this Friday and runs through the weekend. :)
:Dom
Both are impressive haikus. But, I felt an instant click to the second one. Have a great day :)
ReplyDeleteolder and wiser indeed... had we known then what we know now, life would have been different. but then, it was the long process of learning that made us wiser. i love both haiku pieces. :)
ReplyDeletelovely work both Haiku are sweet!
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