Wednesday, 12 January 2011

Sensational Haiku Wednesday

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Greetings from a damp, dark corner of The British Isles! Today's theme is Doldrums.




Listless quiet sea
Wind without power or force
Waiting for release



My soul in darkness
Taut black bands around my mind
Seeking brighter days


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11 comments:

  1. Ellie Garratt12 January 2011 at 10:03

    I enjoyed your Haikus. Beautiful.

    I love your mock novel covers - so simple and clean, and very effective.

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  2. RA12 January 2011 at 10:38

    Beautiful words and images to express the feelings in this haiku. Wishing brighter days for all of us. Have a wonderful week :)

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  3. Anonymous12 January 2011 at 13:33

    fantastic duo. both are splendid, cant chose one as better.

    trisha
    http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com

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  4. Old Kitty12 January 2011 at 13:58

    These are really lovely! I could feel dark despair emanating from these! Take care
    x

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  5. Anonymous12 January 2011 at 15:44

    Very evocative, both of them :O)

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  6. Hannah12 January 2011 at 17:04

    I've never been able to master haikus but they are a joy to read. Thank you!

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  7. Ria12 January 2011 at 23:08

    very evocative!

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  8. Unknown13 January 2011 at 13:33

    I love Haiku (although I must say the exact rules escape me), and these are great!

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  9. Maria McKenzie13 January 2011 at 16:05

    Really beautiful haikus!

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  10. Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?13 January 2011 at 18:02

    You and me both. Nice to find the beauty in the darkness we're both (apparently) feeling! Hoping for brighter days ahead indeed.

    Well done :)

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  11. N. R. Williams13 January 2011 at 19:26

    Love them Margo. I don't think in this way. I guess I'm too wordy.
    Nancy
    N. R. Williams, fantasy author

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